Based on what I have read, and I have read many drabbles this day, numerous writers have managed to turn in significantly better short stories than the one i wrote for this challenge word. I need to up my game and I mean by a lot....

Your use of the challenge word, NIGHT, is perfect. There is something that can be said for decent writing. The way your story flows is great. It is consistent. Marvellously well-worded. Nicely done.