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Great job. This is a brilliantly well-written story. I love the way it unfolds. It looks like, based on what Robin MS wrote in a previous comment, another writer was thinking along similar lines.

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Shain E. Thomas
Shain E. Thomas

Written by Shain E. Thomas

With an M.Sc. from the University of North Texas, I’m a freelance journalist and a social historian. #APStylebook #BBCStyleGuide http://shainethomas.com/

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