Shain E. Thomas
Apr 23, 2024

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Great job. I like how you used the challenge word. I think the lead editor might use the same random word generator as myself. I could be wrong.

Personally, back in the day, I was a CNA. It didn't take me long to figure out it was not for me. It is what it is. Your story, and other stories I have read today, reminded me of this fact.

I like the dramatic tone in your writing. There is more than a modicum of sadness embedded in your story. Curiously, in some stories, it doesn't work. In this case, because of your approach, it works perfectly. Nicely done.

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Shain E. Thomas
Shain E. Thomas

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With an M.Sc. from the University of North Texas, I’m a freelance journalist and a social historian. #APStylebook #BBCStyleGuide http://shainethomas.com/

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