I have always enjoyed a good game of pool. A lot of the places I frequented when playing pool looked a lot like the one pictured. I like your characters. Paul being a womanizer is no surprise.

A lot of pool players I knew were exactly like that. Also, unfortunately for me, a lot of those womanizers were seriously hot. But then, obviously, I was never really their cup of tea.

Nicely done. You captured the characters perfectly.