Shain E. Thomas
Apr 23, 2024

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It feels like the nurse, in your story, is overstepping into uncharted territory. Does she really want to go there?

Nicely written. I like the twist. It feels like this is something that could happen. It reminds me of my favourite medical dramas... House... ER... and Chicago Med.

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Shain E. Thomas
Shain E. Thomas

Written by Shain E. Thomas

With an M.Sc. from the University of North Texas, I’m a freelance journalist and a social historian. #APStylebook #BBCStyleGuide http://shainethomas.com/

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