Shain E. Thomas
Apr 21, 2024

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Sterling work I love this drabble. The pacing is on point. The way you approached the challenge word is marvellous. One can't impress everyone.

Obviously, whilst I'm impressed with what you wrote here, the same can't be said for the character Bea. Bea is clearly unimpressed by what unfolds during the story.

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Shain E. Thomas
Shain E. Thomas

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