Shain E. Thomas
Apr 17, 2024

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The title certainly caught my attention. I think you wrote the title with that in mind. You wanted your readers to see the title and think what could she possibly mean.

Great job. Excellent work. You addressed the challenge word from a marvellous direction. The story is well-balanced. It flows perfectly. Nicely done.

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Shain E. Thomas
Shain E. Thomas

Written by Shain E. Thomas

With an M.Sc. from the University of North Texas, I’m a freelance journalist and a social historian. #APStylebook #BBCStyleGuide http://shainethomas.com/

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