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This drabble image reminds me of a story I heard about the creation of a town known as Telford. The plans, with a blank piece of paper, were trying agree on town planning. None of them could agree.

They all accidentally placed their coffee cups of the paper and left ring marks. They simply joined the rings up and called it Telford. I digress...

You did a great job addressing the challenge word. There is much that can be said for how the story unfolds. It's brilliantly well-written I love the consistency in your writing. The quality is readily apparent. Nicely done.

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Shain E. Thomas
Shain E. Thomas

Written by Shain E. Thomas

With an M.Sc. from the University of North Texas, I’m a freelance journalist and a social historian. #APStylebook #BBCStyleGuide http://shainethomas.com/

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