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This is a great story. You put a lot of effort into making this drabble work. The way you used the challenge word is marvellous. The characters are unquestionably relatable. I am sure your story resonates with numerous readers on several levels.

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Shain E. Thomas
Shain E. Thomas

Written by Shain E. Thomas

With an M.Sc. from the University of North Texas, I’m a freelance journalist and a social historian. #APStylebook #BBCStyleGuide http://shainethomas.com/

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