Shain E. Thomas
Feb 26, 2024

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This is the first Adam and Eve drabble I have read. Nicely done. I must admit feeling a tad confused that the name Eve is not referenced. Is the woman of the story Eve or Lilith? It is certainly food for thought.

I typically stay away from Biblically framed stories. This drabble works nicely. I like the way it flows. It is perfectly balanced.

It is funny how Adam uses a word he does not know the meaning of. It reminds me of a lot of people I personally know. They use words they do not know the meaning of.

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Shain E. Thomas
Shain E. Thomas

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With an M.Sc. from the University of North Texas, I’m a freelance journalist and a social historian. #APStylebook #BBCStyleGuide http://shainethomas.com/

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