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This was a seriously odd challenge word. I am surprised so many people opted to use it. It's not a word people, even though everyone urinates, use everyday.

You did a great job with your story. Your main character feels authentic. I like how the story flows... pun intended. Nicely done.

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Shain E. Thomas
Shain E. Thomas

Written by Shain E. Thomas

With an M.Sc. from the University of North Texas, I’m a freelance journalist and a social historian. #APStylebook #BBCStyleGuide http://shainethomas.com/

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