Shain E. Thomas
Apr 19, 2024

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Your title reminded me of a favoured vampire film I enjoy... It is titled Fright Night.... It's close.

I like the way you approach the challenge word. Rachel seems like an interesting character. She sounds a lot like someone I know.

Your drabble flows really well. It feels consistent. The inclusion of a cat is a nice touch. I like drabbles with cats. Great work.

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Shain E. Thomas
Shain E. Thomas

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With an M.Sc. from the University of North Texas, I’m a freelance journalist and a social historian. #APStylebook #BBCStyleGuide http://shainethomas.com/

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